First off: WERK. WERK. WERK. WERK. SLAY. SLAY ALL THE THINGS.
Okay. This is brilliant work. I’ve included a marked up version and a reworked version, the latter of which is not as compelling as the original but is a more streamlined starting point.
We can talk whenever this week. This cost includes everything related for this project, so we can consult as many times as needed until you feel comfortable with it. But um, yeah, you need to send this out next week.
I think you should send this to Duke, Minnesota, and Oxford. If you’d like, I could talk to my editor and UNC, too, to see if there is some interest there.
I have lots of other thoughts about the project. But let me know what you think about the comments, and we can go from there.